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Fashion Green Triptych. All.

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Three figure in green.
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© 2010 - 2024 Shelest
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First and foremost great to see some new work from you, makes me all giddy <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="31" height="17" alt=":woohoo:" title="Woohooooo!"/>

What stuck out immediately was 'white' space or your use of negative space. I love the breathing room on the top and bottom but I feel the left and right borders are creeping too close. Even a pinch of breathing room would be great.

Mad props on the diversity between the three pieces. They match wonderfully but each has its own unique shape, flare and originality. They really come together to make a cohesive collection.

I am a little divided on the white & red paint splatters. I like the touch but would like to see more of them if they are going to retain their color. If you decide to keep just the few maybe consider desaturating them a bit? My eyes were immediately pulled to that red splatter on the bottom when I opened this up. Maybe another red splatter in the top left corner to help balance it out? Not sure, it's more of a judgment call and assuming the background is suppose to be presented with these three pieces.

Overall this is some great work. This is something I could see hanging in my hallway. This is artwork people should see and possibly own themselves.